50 words story: Don't get involved

Her skin is so soft and delicate reflected by the sun, truly edifying her beauty. I look at her and the love I have for her runs deep inside of me. Then a thought enters my mind and it hits me like a truck, don't get involved with the target.

50 Word Story: Beginning

Frozen In time. Eyes Locked on hers. He sees the glossy shine of her blue eyes with a fiery passion and desire  from underneath. Her presence sucking him in like a Blackhole.  He steps into the overall glow that encompasses her. He grabs her hand and they begin their journey.

Lets talk...

In the first impulse James was expressing his feelings to his close friend sky. No matter what he did he couldn't get her to feel the same way and she ended up getting back with her ex boyfriend Jake who is a total tool. I think instead of fixing the conversation between James and Sky James is going to go mix stuff up with Jake.

Jake: Jimmy buddy looks like you lose at every turn.
James: Just wait she will realize who you really are and change her mind.
Jake: Just face it buddy she is always going to run to me and there is nothing you can do about it. I can do whatever i want she will always come crawling back.
James: That's not how its going to be anymore. Leave town get out of here.
Jake: Or what?
James: Lets leave that to your imagination shall we?
Jake: She isnt even worth it! why are you fighting for her so hard?
James: If I dont who will? you? I dont think so buddy
Jake: I'm not going anywhere.
James: Ha we will see.
James drops the bar that was hidden under his sleeve into his hand and before he goes in for the hit sky enters the scene.
Sky: James don't!
Jake: See? Its always going to be me.
James: I guess your right.
Sky: Hey I'm a big girl i can take care of myself.
James: did you not hear what he said?
Sky: I did but watch he will change.
James: They never do sky! Fine you  stay with him but I'm not going to stick around and clean up the pieces.
Sky: James... don't...
James:Good luck Skylar

50 Word Story: Tick

Like three gummy bears stuck together by the binding glue of justice. Standing on the rooftops of righteousness taking leaps of pride from righteous building to righteous building. Like a linebacker tackling the reciever of deceit. Pulling your pants up after fear has pulled them down. He is the tick!

50 Word Story: Another bottle

Awakened by another bone shattering nightmare. Everyone says time heals everything but sometimes things are written in stone and can't be erased. When you have had the one and only person you have loved ripped from you all you are left with are your nightmares and your rum soaked pillow.

The Beat

My script was about a boy who really wants this girl. He thinks about her all the time but he is stuck in the friend zone. They're really good frends and he treats her really good but she only has eyes for other guys. I dot really know what to do to improve my script.

50 Word Story: I loved you first

He grabs her hand as she lie in the hospital bed still beautiful, still graceful. "I don't want you to be lonely I want you to find somebody else". He looked down on her wiped a tear from her cheek and she was gone. "loved you first and will forever".