Wednesday, January 12, 2011

Time

Tick tock tick tock
we sit in anguish as we wait fo the hands of time to move on the clock.
I ask you what is the purpose? Why sit and just stay nervous?
Life is a fuse on a stick of dynamite it's waitig for the light that will lead to the explosion of emotion blowing bitsand pieces of that notion if bull shit that we should just sit and go through every motion.

Life is here to be lived.
Live.
Do you know what it means?
Define it.
It's holding her hand without a care in the world it's defending and fighting for your friends with you last dying breath because they are your world. It's sitting back and forgetting what your told it's time to break out of this mold beforetime leave us
and we get too old. Nelson always says we are gonna die in 70 years anyway. Nelson I'm sold. Stop being cowardly I don't care if bravery does or does not run in your family.
I stand here and give you this rhyme and tell you please don't wait for time because it will not wait for you.

Sunday, December 12, 2010

The Journey of Alan: The Hangover

Ordinary World: Alan Spent most of life being a weird guy. He was never all there but inside he was yearning for a change.
Meeting the Mentor: Alan;s sister was going to marry a guy named Doug. Doug was helping Alan change for the better.
Call to Adventure: Doug's bachelor party. This was Alan's chance to try to be normal. This was his chance to gain friends and be liked by others.
Refusal of the Call: He was wary of Doug at first and did not know wether or not to become friends.
Crossing the Threshold: He went to the bachelor party in Las Vegas with Doug and his friends. He embraced new things.
Test, Allies, and Enemies: The biggest test he went through was losing doug. His allies were his wolf pack Stu and phil, and they had to find their other wolf Doug. Other allies were a Stripper/Prostitute, A black drug dealer named Doug, and Mike Tyson. His enemies were an asian gang.
Ordeal: He found evidence to help find Doug. He also counted cards and won money in blackjack to trade for doug.
Reward: Stu and Phil loved Alan and wanted to be his friend.
Road Back: Alan gave them all roofies and it caused them to lose Doug. Stu and Phil were angry with him.
Resurrection: They forgave Alan and they foundDoug and got back in time for Doug's wedding.

Monday, December 6, 2010

My fault: Ben Folds Landed Adaptation

All I do is lay here.

I think about her, how did we get here?
Wait!
It was me, I pushed her away. It was my pride, my ego. She was far from perfect but my head was somewhere else. I am the reason for my endless spiral into nothing.

Monday, November 29, 2010

Da blurbs

1. Landed by Ben Folds.
Twenty two year old John Whitaker was in love with Amy Johnson. He perceived the relationship they had as toxic. He moved California and then realized that the problem was his all along. He is now on a quest to win her back. She wants nothing to do with him.
2. King of Anything by Sara Bareilles 
A girl has been in a relationship long enough to realized that her boyfriend is manipulating and controlling her. On the outside he seems perfect and the model husband. At home he is nothing but a terror, not allowing her to live the way she wants. She finally stands up and defends herself.
3.


My Six

10. Eyes for him not for me.
9. You want a piece of me?
8. She kissed me and said yes.
7. You left me again, come back.
6. Fight to live, live to fight.
5. Man, myth, legend, George Fitzpatrick wright.
4. Memories of you on my bedside.
3. Stand up, fight now and forever.
2. Why do nice guys finish last?
1. It doesn't end here, it begins.

Monday, November 22, 2010

50 Word Story: Dont Leave Me This Way

All around me I see cold, white, sterile, walls. Wrapped in white chains and bands. I lay helpless scared, this is where you left me. Insane, shaking, without my sense. I never knew you were so heartless to leave my mind blank like the walls that surround me. Typical you.

Sunday, November 21, 2010

Lyrics and Five Elements

Title: Landed
Artist: Ben Folds
Landed Lyrics

Plot: It seems to be about a relationship between a guy and a girl. It seems to be toxic and the guy leaves. He moves to the West Coast and realizes it was his fault all along. He finally gets his act together but when he figures it all out it might be too late.

Character: The guy who left, the girl who the guy left, it refers to everyone so I think its his friends or family, the lyrics also refer to a girl who didn't let the guy know his ex called him (a sister or an old friend).

Conflict: Him leaving and trying to get her back also not getting the call.

Theme: Don't just assume your right about everything. Sit back and take a look at everything around you before its too late to change.

Setting: From all I can tell he started in the East and moved to the West then back to the East for the girl. I think it is set in modern times.